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Title: Farewell, my friend...
Post by: DeadClown on 2012-10-25, 17:22:54
This is a scene which was first intended as a scatter test (the grass), but then it got bigger and bigger...
I'm a very lousy charactermodeller, or to be more precise: I really suck at modelling humanoid stuff ;) So the girl was the hardest part here ;)
I hope you like it :) . Rendertime was about 1.5 hours in 1080p (resized it to get rid of the dof noise).
Title: Re: Farewell, my friend...
Post by: Chakib on 2012-10-25, 17:31:39
Wow awesome result !
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Post by: alieneye on 2012-10-25, 17:57:21
nice!
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Post by: Ocram on 2012-10-25, 18:07:05
fantastic job!
But I see  blue leaves on the left, uhmmm or maybe they are flowers?
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Post by: Ludvik Koutny on 2012-10-25, 19:13:49
Amazing, man! This is probably the first serious scene done in Corona...  thanks very much!!!
Title: Re: Farewell, my friend...
Post by: DeadClown on 2012-10-25, 19:39:26
Thanks for your comments guys! :)
ocram: yes... those leafs got a little too blue.. you shouldn't look too closely ;) I like the blue touch that's why I kept things like that. hm... maybe I will change that ;)
Title: Re: Farewell, my friend...
Post by: maru on 2012-10-25, 20:36:23
They are reflecting sky, right?

Anyway, great render. I like its mood, but in this case some kind of volumetric fog would be really useful. You could also make it more "photographic" by adding motion blur to the girl's hands. But maybe this would be too much. Less = more. :)
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Post by: igni on 2012-10-25, 20:55:39
Great work! And so emotional)
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Post by: Ondra on 2012-10-25, 21:19:24
added to the front page ;)
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Post by: woshilvba on 2012-10-26, 06:10:02
Wonderful rendering! !
By the way, you render time?
Title: Re: Farewell, my friend...
Post by: andreupuig on 2012-10-26, 08:51:25
Just one thing: the bark! Where's the bark! ;)
Beautiful image and especially the light
Title: Re: Farewell, my friend...
Post by: Javadevil on 2012-10-26, 11:07:05


Just Awesome !!!!

Great composition, lighting, mood its all awesome.

cheers
Title: Re: Farewell, my friend...
Post by: DeadClown on 2012-10-26, 11:11:48
Thanks again for your comments :) I'm glad you all like it !

@maru: yes, it's the sky and a bit too much post-color-correction on those blue tones. Participating media would have been aweseom for this image, but also hair rendering would have been a great thing ;)
@keymaster: yeeehaa :D
@woshilvba: 1.5 hours ;)
@andreupuig: the bark? There is bark.. maybe a bit dark but as I already said.. don't look too closely on the details :D
Title: Re: Farewell, my friend...
Post by: michaltimko on 2012-10-26, 11:31:10
wow! That baloon needs lil bit more of transculency but rest is perfect :)
Title: Re: Farewell, my friend...
Post by: Ludvik Koutny on 2012-10-26, 12:12:33
I think andreupuig means that bark material looks a bit too homogeneous. Looks more like brown diffuse material with some fractal noise bump applied. Could help to use some bark texture with more obvious structure :)
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Post by: andreupuig on 2012-10-26, 12:55:53
Exactly Rawalance. On my monitor I can't see any bump or texture, it seems chocolate, not a bad idea, but it will be another kind of image ;)
Don't worry, image in beautiful at this stage :D
Title: Re: Farewell, my friend...
Post by: sunji_lacsi on 2013-06-05, 10:55:46
unique concept and cool corona render...