Author Topic: Plane  (Read 672 times)

2018-11-03, 04:56:59

omaranbar@gmail.com

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Corona 3d rendering for cargo planes.

2018-11-03, 21:04:14
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burnin

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Nice attempt, but...
1&2 - Lighting doesn't fit (observe how light falls over the object and where the lights sources are in the image) - also take care of reflections, know the surface planes have.
3 - Scale is off (take warehouse elements in relation to the plane's elements - seems quite a small plane ;)
4 - That background, can you recognize the perspective - either clouds are off or the plane is flying extremely sideways... wouldn't wanna be on :D

Disregard my comment, if you can't see it... but keep up the spirit!
« Last Edit: 2018-11-03, 21:08:13 by burnin »

2018-11-05, 07:39:33
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omaranbar@gmail.com

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Thanks for your comments.

2018-11-05, 08:58:43
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