Author Topic: Artist's house  (Read 3845 times)

2015-05-08, 12:28:27

divistudio

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Artist's house. 3d visialization project.
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« Last Edit: 2015-05-08, 14:13:24 by divistudio »

2015-05-08, 12:54:21
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fLuppster

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The architecture looks really great, but the vegetation could need a bit more love.

2015-05-08, 13:56:09
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Freakaz

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Nice and pleasant color balance. The grass could be more realistic and random, as fLuppster said. It looks more like a carpet at the moment and the line between the sky and the roof is jagged.
From my point of view: The balustrade on the 2nd floor windows is to "heavy" You're using frameless glass and kill all the lightness of it with massive louvers, imho it's unnecessary.  The rounded top of the fence also "falls out". House has strict forms, sharp corners and suddenly there's that rounded fence top out of nowhere :/

2015-05-08, 14:02:44
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divistudio

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Thank you! As for the grass - I agree. As for the architecture and the fence - this does not matter to me. I renderer, not the architect. Thank you for your constructive comments

2015-05-08, 17:50:01
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Adi

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I love the overall image , great looking house and atmosphere.
I think you could add a subtle bump to the glass as a nice detail.

2015-05-11, 10:35:22
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2015-05-11, 14:44:42
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ska

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Very nice image. Grass looks good to me,fine and tidy grass :)

2015-05-12, 10:50:51
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dia

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Nice work. Great mood and good lightning.
/DIA

2015-05-13, 04:01:23
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Alex Abarca

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looks great but i can see the cutout...try defringe command in photoshop and should remove the black border.

2015-06-19, 20:22:20
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Thank you! As for the grass - I agree. As for the architecture and the fence - this does not matter to me. I renderer, not the architect. Thank you for your constructive comments

Superb and inspiring work, and I compltely agree with you, most of us aren't designers on all projects, we are simply copying what's on that blueprint. Great work